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My one suggestion is that you include the comics that precede the movie in a menu. I have seen other movies from deviantart contests that provided NG viewers the option of reading the comics that came before hand. That orients the viewer so that he or she has a better experience watching your movie.
Author's Response:
You know that is not a bad idea. Although I would have to figure out how to fit the comics since they have a weird format.
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I liked the idea. Honestly, before I saw this, I thought that you could not possibly make a joke that I have not already heard, but you did. I think that the joke was funny.
That said, the delivery of that joke could have been better all around. The art and animation was crude, but acceptable. The most glaring flaw was in the voice acting. There seemed to be an incredibly annoying static whenever the storm troopers spoke. I know that part of it was a desired effect, but their voices were harsh and unpleasant. The voices of the storm troopers were so jarring that they distracted me from the plot, including the punch line itself. These flaws detracted from the solid humor of the piece.
Overall, I thought this was an entertaining flash movie. If you improve the art, animation and voice acting of your future movies, I am sure that you could make great flashes. Please continue to produce and submit flash movies. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I didn't make the audio, just the flash itself, but thanks for the review!
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I thought this was a very good movie.
1. I found it to be hilarious. I loved the way you turned Sherlock Holmes on its ear (I read many of those stories when I was young).
2. I liked the voices very much.
3.The animation was very nice. The backgrounds reminded me of Blockhead. How do you make those?
4. I think that Sir Digsby Reginald Frostbottom is a very recognizable and lovable character. I think he could become part of "the gang," just like Pico, Alien Hominid or Bitey.
All in all, I think this would be a great series. I sincerely hope that you do make this into a series. Thank you.
P.S. Do not be discouraged by the fact that this movie has gotten little attention. The first episode of Salad Fingers got virtually no attention and no awards. Now Salad Fingers is one of the best known and most beloved series on Newgrounds.
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Thanks! i really appreciate the feedback!
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Is that Rick Astley I hear? I have a question for illwillpenis: Why are you blue?
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I have an answer for JT1: Da ba dee da ba die.
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Next time, try adding audio, color and a background.
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i will maybe but it makes more time to colour those things but background isnt broblem
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I wish the Predator moved a little more fluidly. It moved unrealistically. If it was more agile, it would have been more entertaining.
Also, when the henchman is thrown out of the window, I think it should have hit the ground before the Kill Count changed. Blood would spatter onto the side of the building, and then the Kill Count would rise.
If I think of anything else, I will PM you.
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OK, thank you for the review
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A picture of Hugh Laurie's right eye with music is not artsy. It is spam.
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i suppose you're right
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I like the fight sequences and the music. I think you need to put more work into the backgrounds and the attacks. Add some color.
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it's an animation from 1998...we didn't have color
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This is way too slow. It looks more like a slow dance than a sword fight.
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lol no flashes
also i will make it quicker
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I know this was practice, but it was boring and unoriginal. Keep working. Try a more complex game next time and submit it.
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I will make another game aftewards.
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