Score: 8

"Pretty good."

submission: Like a Brother

date: June 8, 2009

I liked this video. The art was pleasing. I enjoyed the style very much. However, the song was not my favorite. I also didn't think it matched the video.

Score: 6

"Pretty good."

submission: Tankmen: Incursion

date: April 30, 2009

I think this is a pretty good game. I think that the art is beautiful. I like the idea of a Tankman platformer.

However, the camera makes this game virtually unbearable to play. The camera was constantly moving very rapidly and unpredictably. I found it quite disorienting. If you fixed the camera, then I would probably love this game.

Score: 7

"Good game."

submission: Bang! Heroes

date: April 21, 2009

I really did enjoy this game. It was unique and fun.

I have two suggestions. First, now that you can put achievements on Newgrounds, why don't you list the achievements here? It may be some more work, but it would greatly improve my experience. Second, I wish that I could crouch to avoid shots. Often when the enemy gunmen appeared, I wished that I could crouch. Those are my two simple suggestions. I hope that they help you.

Overall, this is a good game. I hope that you submit more games soon.

Score: 6

"Pretty good. Could definitely have been better."

submission: Lana Goes To Paris

date: February 22, 2009

I thought that this was a pretty good game, but it had some serious flaws. Here are my suggestions for improving this game:

1. The items on the list should be crossed out as you find them. That way, the player will know how many items are left.
2. Also, it seemed that the level ended when the time ran out. The level should end when I have found all of the items on the list.
3. A few times, the list included items that were not on the screen. I had already found those items and they had not been replaced on the screen. This got worse with each level. This should not happen. This almost ruins the game in my opinion.
4. Finally, there should be a small penalty for clicking the screen without finding an item. This would discourage the crazy clicking everything in sight that I resorted to before realizing that some of the items on the list were not on the screen.

I hope to see you submit more games to the portal soon.

Score: 7

"Artistic and unique."

submission: The Lady In White

date: February 20, 2009

Artistic movies on NG, while not unheard of, are rather rare. It seems to me that this is a story about love and loss. I cannot think of any other movie on NG that captures this theme in a similar way. Good job.

There were flaws, however. The biggest flaw that I detected was that the motion is jerky and unnatural. It lacked the fluidity of motion in the real world. It seems that the characters are moving in loops, repeating the motion multiple times as well, exacerbating the problem of the unnatural motion. Watch the movie yourself and you will see what I mean. This jerkiness distracted me while I watched this movie, especially during the dance scene and when the man is walking into, through and out of the dark space. maybe the looping, unnatural movement was intentional, but it distracted me and detracted from the experience.

Still, I think that overall this was a good movie. I hope to see more submissions from you soon.

Score: 7

"It was good."

submission: SDL- Axen Vs. Aurelio

date: February 18, 2009

My one suggestion is that you include the comics that precede the movie in a menu. I have seen other movies from deviantart contests that provided NG viewers the option of reading the comics that came before hand. That orients the viewer so that he or she has a better experience watching your movie.

Score: 7

"Pretty good movie."

submission: What in the World?

date: February 8, 2009

I liked this movie.

I had no problems with the audio quality. The voice acting could have been better, but I thought that the audio quality was fine.

The art was not spectacular, but it was not unpleasant. I do not think that the quality of the art detracted from the movie.

In the animation department, the only thing that bugged me were the mouths. I know that lip syncing is particularly hard, but it is important to me at least. I hope that in your next movie you have better lip syncing.

I thought that the plot was solid. It was funny. I do not want to give anything away, but several things were unexpected by me.

Overall, this was an entertaining movie. Please keep up the good work.

Score: 7

"Good game."

submission: Spot The Green Dot 3

date: February 8, 2009

I liked the art. It was interesting and pleasant. The music was good too. It never became annoying, which so often happens in flash games.

I wish that you would number the pictures. It would have been better if I knew what picture I was on, how many I had done and how many were left.

Overall, it was a good game. Keep up the good work.

Score: 6

"Pretty funny."

submission: Obi-Wan's Brilliance

date: January 22, 2009

I liked the idea. Honestly, before I saw this, I thought that you could not possibly make a joke that I have not already heard, but you did. I think that the joke was funny.

That said, the delivery of that joke could have been better all around. The art and animation was crude, but acceptable. The most glaring flaw was in the voice acting. There seemed to be an incredibly annoying static whenever the storm troopers spoke. I know that part of it was a desired effect, but their voices were harsh and unpleasant. The voices of the storm troopers were so jarring that they distracted me from the plot, including the punch line itself. These flaws detracted from the solid humor of the piece.

Overall, I thought this was an entertaining flash movie. If you improve the art, animation and voice acting of your future movies, I am sure that you could make great flashes. Please continue to produce and submit flash movies. Thank you.

Score: 6

"Good story, but the animation and audio needs work"

submission: DINOZ

date: January 18, 2009

I liked the story. It was unexpected and funny, at least in my opinion. However, the animation definitely needs work. Better art and more movement would have made this flash more enjoyable. The audio could have been clearer as well. All in all, I think it was a pretty good flash. I hope that you submit more flash in the future.